Thursday, September 18, 2014

Journal 11

She was sure this was where she had left him. In this grove. She started to panic frantically as her hands move against the leaves. She pleaded he was still there. She could remember the screams. That hasn't stopped her though. "I'll find you I promise." She said as her voice quivered.  Still frantically scurrying through the leaves until she felt it. A ribbon a red ribbon to be exact. The girl smiled as she pulled on it. I'm coming was all she thought. The small door opened to revel a hole with a flight of stairs. It was to dark to see but it was there. She slowly stepped onto the first step and every step she would take the stairs would creak. Every step she took the hole grew darker. She set the light down. "Brother I'm here. I thought I lost you."  The girl grinned and she say down at this little table that was located there. "Come have tea with me." She hummed a lovely tuned as she set the teddy bears for a tea party. "Isn't this fun brother." She grabbed the lantern to bring the light to his face. "Your smiling!" She said happily. In the light sat a boy in a chair. Not a boy no just his skeleton. Sitting there as his psychotic sister still believed him dead. Or maybe just maybe he was alive and that skeleton wasn't his...trying to escape her imaginary world. Where she loved only him and would never leave him alone. He faked his death...or maybe she killed him herself?

5 comments:

  1. It's so creepy, I love it! Write the whole thing and show it to me, please.

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  2. Dude this reminds me of Future Diary.

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  3. You need to put a comma after she felt it and after no just his skeleton

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  4. Oh, dude, this is so cool. I like it a lot. You put your instead of you're in one part btw

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